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The Flowsman Family takes a little trip in their FTL star ship, Then make a startling discovery when they get their. A story of first contact. Take everything you know about Sci-fi from TV and put it in one story. That's what you will get in this story. A little bit of everything.
Size: 346 KB (62,979 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Mult, Science Fiction, Humor, Oral Sex

Review by The Night Hawk   [other reviews by The Night Hawk]

Reviewed:


If you grew up watching any of the Star Trek series, and wondered or imagined your own tale of how sex would be handled, this story is a very pleasant surprise.

I ran across it by accident, and now I check nightly for updates. (Yes, the author is that prolific.)

Borrowing from every good space show ever seen on broadcast TV, "Star Trek" and all the spin-offs, "Babylon 5," and a host of others, the author has created an ideal universe - one that Gene would have been proud of!

The sex scenes are good, and variety is plentiful. I'm not sure if I am reading it for the sex however as the plot is nicely intertwined. I admit to being a fan of the shows mentioned, but it's the way the story is told that keeps me coming back.

The low score on the technical quality is simply a matter of basic grammar and spelling. If this story is ever edited and reposted, I will gladly raise the value of that score, however, the story moves at a pace quick enough that I find myself overlooking small typos. I had to reread a few chapters before writing this review so I could be totally honest.

One of the things that endears me to the story is the consistency of each chapter. There has yet to be a chapter that hasn't had me wanting another - right away!

Above all, it is a pleasing read. It is also part of a series or universe of stories all of which show the same quality. A rare commodity.

I highly recommend this story!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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