Two brother's caught up in a life long vendetta. When one leaves for college, the other one starts to grow and change his whole perspective. This is a slow developing story. The first part just introduces the characters and sets the scene for future interactions.
Size: 457 KB (91,307 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Cheating, Slut Wife, DomSub, MaleDom, FemaleDom, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, School
Review by mbeau [other reviews by mbeau]
Reviewed:
This is a very well written story for the most part.
The characters are extremely well written and there are no giant changes in personality for the most part.
The plot is extremely well thought out and, keeping in mind it is fiction, makes sense for the most part.
Why the continual emphasis of "on the most part." Well, the last part of the story seems tacked on and rushed out. It makes no sense and completely ruined the rest of the story for me.
Discounting the final part, the sex is hot, the plot is great and the writing is extremely sound and solid.
The marks in the text of the review (below) are for the story without the ending. The official ones (after the review) are with the end included.
Stroke - 9
Plot - 9
Tech - 9
Appeal - 10
