Brad Tarkenton was rich and powerful and... alone. He'd lost everything that meant anything to him. Now, on a business trip, he'd meet a woman who would surprise him and, possibly, even make his life complete.
Codes, in this case, would spoil the suspense and surprise of the story. Go to B.O.B's blog for an explanation of why he feels some stories shouldn't be fully coded.
Size: 194 KB (37,810 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Oral Sex, Petting, Pregnancy, Slow, Caution
Review by BikeWriter [other reviews by BikeWriter]
Reviewed:
Fuzzywuzzy's spectacular review on 2005-11-21 of Lubrican's masterful tale was a wonderful reference to an enjoyable read. This story has everything, tragedy, despair, romance and triumph! The story well deserves being spotlighted again.
My rating? Four stars!:
Plot: 10
Stroke Ratio: 10
Technical Quality: 10
Appeal to Reviewer: 10
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
I don't usually review stories in progress, as sometimes authors abandon them in "mid stream," to coin a phrase. But I must admit that this is one of B-O-B's best works. There is tragedy, hate, love, the culturing of a protegee, and the loss of his two children just to name a few scenarios going on in the story.
Over the years, our hero has his first love taken from him, and from that moment on every personal act of his fails miserably. On top of his wife's tragic death two subsequent marriages to the wrong women end in divorce, and his son and daughter disappear from the face of the earth.
On a trip to Cleveland to encourage his general manager he realizes that his manager's pregnant wife is truly the power behind the young executive's success, and that she is also a beautiful and talented high priced ex-hooker. The hero is invited to a staff gathering, and the wife arranges for a friend of hers to go as the boss's date.
Complicated things are getting!
And one of this year's most erotic sexiest love scenes occurs, and then the following day the love scene occurs again!
And there we are, hooker and John fall in love, and we are asked to wait to find out what happens next... Hey, I'm a sucker for a good love story, and this has everything, including incest!
