15 year old Billy is on vacation with his mom and dad when he is caught jacking off by his mother, with her panties. When she finds out that he has seen the picture of her, the one taken by her dad she reveals her secret, then she seduces him like her father had done to her.
Size: 26 KB (5,394 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Incest, Mother, Son, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation
Review by The SlutMan [other reviews by The SlutMan]
Reviewed:
This is the story of a fifteen year old boy losing his virginity to his mother, when she catches him masturbating with a pair of her underwear. He confesses that he has seen a picture of her laying in bed wearing just a pair of panties.
She is horrified that he has discovered the picture and she confesses that it was taken by her father, shortly after she lost her virginity to him, with her mother's help.
I like the premise of the story, the way it develops, and the way it moves along. The sex is pretty good, too.
With that said, the dialog seems a little stiff to me, and there are enough typos and grammatical mistakes in it to keep the reader from becoming fully immersed in the story.
That should not stop the average reader from enjoying his work. His stories are imaginative and quite hot, and he covers a surprising variety of themes in them, everything from anal to voyeurism. In short, there is a little bit of everything here for a reader, and I recommend that you browse his page. You won't regret it.
I would also highly recommend to the author that he take advantage of the volunteer editors available to him here on SOL. With just a little help, his stories would become very, very readable.
