Reviewed:
I liked the story, or I wouldn't have reviewed it, but it ended rather quickly and abruptly. So it may not appeal to everyone. I would rather not go over the plot, there isn't a lot and probably you will prefer to discover it yourself rather than have me discuss it.
Doing the numbers, I give the plot a 7, which is a B using high school grading. Both Technical and Appeal are 8s. That is an A, the story is fairly short, even though there are 8 chapters. I think there could have been more, or a sequel but the Author obviously did not agree with me.
"Alistair Acorn - Unknown
The reasons for Alistair Acorn becoming an Inactive Contributor are not known.
Alistair began posting stories to SOL on June 23, 2005 and posted his last story on May 2, 2010. During that period, he posted seventy stories to SOL. According to his Profile, Alistair also used the penname: Rellik.
This page was last updated on: May 7, 2019"