Author's Description:
He needs community service credit to graduate from High School. She recently lost her sight and is having trouble dealing with her disability. His description of her, "She's about as friendly as a razor wire fence." Her description of him, "I can tell by the smell that it's the same pile of crap again today." Sounds like a perfect match doesn't it? Take a look into "Amanda's Eyes".
Size: 220 KB (42,322 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Slow
He needs community service credit to graduate from High School. She recently lost her sight and is having trouble dealing with her disability. His description of her, "She's about as friendly as a razor wire fence." Her description of him, "I can tell by the smell that it's the same pile of crap again today." Sounds like a perfect match doesn't it? Take a look into "Amanda's Eyes".
Size: 220 KB (42,322 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Slow
Review by mbeau [other reviews by mbeau]
Reviewed:
Wow. That is all that I can say. Wow.
This is an amazing story that looks like it has the potential to go on for a very long time.
The two main characters are real and act real. It would be nice to see some more of the supporting characters and find out more about them though. For the moment they are very two dimensional.
The writing is very clean and error free, although that may be due to the sheer number of editors the author has.
The descriptions of the scenes is absolutely amazing and very real, as are the situations that the haracters have found themselves in so far.
Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
