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Author's Description:
Nedia Adams, a shy girl who never had a real boyfriend before, Noah Mathew, one of the the most popular guys in school. Their story and how you can plan for something and end up with another!
Size: 133 KB (26,074 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, First

Review by Woody   [other reviews by Woody]

Reviewed:


A romance with a nice twist. This one is told from two points of view and jumps back and forth between the end of high school and the present, four years later. Nedia decides she is finally ready to take revenge on Noah for what he did to her four years ago. Revenge, however is something more easily planned than carried out, especially as we learn that the events at the end of high school were more complicated than Nedia or Noah had ever suspected. Sure, you can see where the story is going early on but the ride is worth it so keep reading.

It looks like the author has posted an updated version to fix most of the presentation errors present in the original submission.

Not a stroke story, the sex is appropriate for the plot.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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