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Author's Description:
The "R-rated" version of the original "Last Frontier". If you are looking for the really nasty stuff, the censors edited it, at least as much as didn't totally ruin the story. I mean the bad guys are bad, at least compared to the good guys. LF I will be posted as a new story like LF II. If you are looking it for sexual content then pass this one by.
Size: 210 KB (39,241 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Rape, Heterosexual, Fiction, Fan Fiction, Violent

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


I just finished Last Frontier I by Luckier Dog and for the most part found it VERY readable.
He proves you don't have to have sex dripping from every paragraph or chapter to write well.
I do wish the characters were developed more. Did I miss another prequel?
I just seemed to dump the characters into various scenarios with little or no back ground to justify the setting.
The story is good and I'll look forward to reading more of his works.
I did read the epilog and felt a few words should be said.

I'm a Pagan. Always have been and always will be. That said, it does not mean I cannot appreciate another's efforts, not only in his writing but his life. Good On YA!.

Don't let the little minded dweebs get your goat. Live your life as YOU see fit, guided by what YOU believe. Let the others observe and wish.

'sheets

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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