Reviewed:
Otherworld is an amazing Isekai story that has a very good plot, great character development, and a good pacing. Even the smut is relevant to the plot and mostly adds to the story, rather than distracting from it.
I loved that the story came with a realism that often lacks in stories like these. The hero of the story does not turn into a hero overnight, but instead Loner takes his time with the character and plot development.
On the technical side I did not notice any noteworthy mistakes.
The only downside to the story is that it ends with a promise for a follow up story, but checking Loner's page, it appears that they never did.
If you enjoy mind control and Isekai stories, then you should definitely give this one a read.
Reviewed:
As part of a geology assignment for school a boy is out collecting rocks when he discovers a portal to another world. When he travels to the other world the initial portal he used is destroyed and so unless he can find another portal to return he is trapped. This is a story of his adventures in this "Otherworld" and the discovery of the events that occur there.
This land is a medieval type, magical place. The dark dwellers have been attacking the good kingdom. The author has created an interesting setting with an interesting plot. I enjoyed seeing how the characters came together and how things were eventually resolved. Without giving the story away I enjoyed the misdirection that was part of the plot that is revealed at the end. Part of the plot involved the boy discovering he had pheromone power that gave him control over women. Guess how he uses that, hahaha. I don't recall any glaring errors so I would say it was fairly well written. While it did have some sex in it this was not a stroke story, more of a plot driven piece. If you enjoy sword and sorcery pieces, you will enjoy this story. I did and was glad I read it.