An introverted man becomes a reluctant Master when he succumbs to temptation and accepts a gift from someone he hates. Then, just as he begins to accept his fate, he is faced with overwhelming temptation yet again... and again. An erotic novel of hypnotic slavery, in three parts.
Size: 724 KB (138,010 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, ft/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Mind Control, Hypnosis, Fiction, BDSM, MaleDom, Light Bond, Humiliation, Harem, Oral Sex, Petting, Sex Toys, Squirting, Pregnancy, Slow
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "The Addicted Natural", blacknight99 takes us along for the journey of Freddy, a student finishing up his doctorate. Freddy is visited by a wandering hypnotists, and is gifted with his on female. Read on as the plot unfolds.
Sexually, the story was pretty good. The initial scene with each girl was usually excellent. The follow-up scenes with various girls were often cut too short for them to really be considered stroke.
The story plot itself was fun. While Freddy was in control, his first girl would often "Top from the bottom", or lead him in a direction she wanted him to go. Freddy wasn't much of a dominant, but more of a caretaker. Don't expect real D/s out of this, for it will disappoint you if that is what you are looking for. The "Dee's Diary" section was an interesting way to supply us with back-story.
Technically, the story was very sound. The author used some very nice visual metaphors for different events to convey dream sequences at times. Nothing jarred me out of my enjoyment of the story.
All in all, I enjoyed this story. As much time as there was spent on the 3 different women, Freddy himself seemed to lack an insight into them, while the 3 women figured each other out easily. Not being a real dominant hindered Freddy's acceptance of much of what happened, and it was realistically portrayed as such.
If you want light D/s and/or hypno-erotica, this is a nice story of a good size.
