How did it happen? When did my best friend start looking at me in this way? How did I make it this far being so clueless?
Size: 112 KB (22,340 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Slow
Review by sysyphus [other reviews by sysyphus]
Reviewed:
A full-blooded, suck you in, pluck the heartstrings tear-jerker of a romance. Was that clear enough? :)
I really enjoyed this story, and it brought tears to my eyes at the end even though I had guessed where things were going.
The sex is well described but minimal; just enough to support the plot.
If you want warmth, romance, feelgood, read it. If you want a stroke story, don't.
I'm waiting for the next one!
Review by Mark [other reviews by Mark]
Reviewed:
A wonderful love story.
This is the first story I've read from "large_pianist." I was enthralled enough to keep coming back when new chapters were posted.
This story of a young man finally realizing that he has fallen in love with his best friend, with flashbacks to some good memories, is well crafted, smoothly written - no small accomplishment on any story - and memorable.
While there are a few typos, none are harsh enough to make this story hard to read. The style is lively, never dragging, never full of gratuitous details. The closest the story comes to tiresome reading is during some financial transactions that are a requisite part of the story.
This is not a stroke story. This is a relationship between a boy and girl as they grow to man and woman; the make out sessions are well described.
A good, easy read.
