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Author's Description:
Herb is a burnt-out Silicon Valley engineer on a downward slope. He rubs a magic lamp, and a djinni appears. Herb's life improves. Sufficently improved magic cannot be distinguished from technology.
Size: 284 KB (53,299 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction, Genie, Harem, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Slow

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


I first quote from FuzzyWuzzy, "What if you found a djinii in a lamp, and then another, and another, until you had seven, or were there more? What if you had the greatest lover , and then had a Bank deeded to you, and... and... Wouldn't that be a bucket load of fun?! Enjoy."

Now, what if you stopped just when it got to be a lot of fun? This is what the author did. I want to know how he nails his ex and how he handles a bank and how he furnishes his new home and how he handles his marriage with a whole bunch of sexy djinns hanging around.

This could have been a GREAT ride. Unfortunately exalphageek is batting .500 for finishing stories and he does have a lot to offer.
He is one of the few authors who I will wait until I actually see a last chapter before I waste time reading an incomplete story.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


What if you found a djinii in a lamp, and then another, and another, until you had seven, or were there more? What if you had the greatest lover , and then had a Bank deeded to you, and... and... Wouldn't that be a bucket load of fun?! Enjoy.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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