Brad is forced into taking a job he wasn't prepared for
Size: 59 KB (11,041 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Oral Sex, Masturbation, Squirting
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
What can I say? It's a stroke story with a bare minimum of plot. Or perhaps I should say wearing a robe.
One guy, lots of ladies who get to exercise in a number of interesting ways. It's hard for the guy to keep up the good work, but he manages, somehow. That's why it's fiction.
It's against the reviewer's code to include spoilers, but you won't be disappointed by this story. The author has a pool of 186 stories posted on SOL. I have no idea why I never heard of him before. I plan on dipping into his pool fairly often. I recommend others do the same.
Plot is a six, average. What do you want for a stroke story? Technical quality is fine. Lets give it an eight, nobody is perfect and the way the alphabet is pronounced in the story could be criticized. I didn't think it was wrong, just "enthusiastic". Appeal to Reviewer is an eight, an A. It's only a stroke story but its a good one. You can thank the "random story from the archives" for the story that lead to this review. I guess 2005 was a pretty good year.
