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Rob and Teri have been friends for years and grew up spending lots of time in the Sycamore tree reading in the treehouses they built. Now, in the very top of the tree, something happens and, as the wind blows, they give each other their virginity.
Size: 28 KB (5,443 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, First, Petting, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

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Rob and Teri, two teenagers, got caught up in a sycamore tree.

One of my favorite authors, Lubrican, penned a soon-to-be classic ’As The Wind Blows.’ A story from March 2005, as love erupts in the highest branches of a sycamore tree. As the tree swayed in the breeze, the brave youths discovered the facts of life.

Lubrican wrote about young love, birds, and bees; little escaped his keen eye and sharp pencil as he endeavored to express his talent. ‘As The Wind Blows’ is a true expression of love in the wind or tenderness in the air.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


Aaah Youth! Especially Uncle Bob's 'Youth"; Rob is a very nice well brought up young man. And where other young men go out for Baseball, or Football, or Soccer, well you get the idea, he loves to curl up with a good book. In bed? Nah. On a Sofa? Nah. Up a tree? N ... Now wait a minute ... Yeah. A Sycamore to be precise. And worse of all Not Alone!You see he and his beautiful Tom-Boy girlfriend Teri, built themselves a Tree House. We-e-eel not quite, more of a tree-floor, no walls or roof, and just enough room for two sleeping bags, close together. Add a Rock-a-Bye-Baby Breeze, with the two buddies who are suddenly exposed as "I'll show you Mine, If You'll show me Your's" And before you could show ... the wind does its dirty job. And you've guessed it, and the question asked is "Is she pregnant? Ooh, I hope so.

I must admit to being in favour of young ladies a-la-Lubrican getting Preggers and the delightful manner that Bob uses to achieve his ends is well worth the effort in reading it! Enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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