Slave Max by Hungry Guy

Author's Description:
Ethan gets a great deal on a pre-owned slave from a shady used-slave dealership.
Size: 55 KB ( ~ 10,430 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, NonConsensual, Heterosexual, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Rough, Humiliation, First, Sex Toys, Caution

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed: 2009-11-02

A quick read, which normally I don't go for, but this one sucked me in! Story reminds me in a strange way of when I bought my first car! Wish my car had half the options this guys new toy came with!!!

I felt the story was way to short, but it had all the elements it needed, I just like longer stories! Technically well done, few minor spelling errors etc, but nothing that detracts from the story! It's part of a "universe" of short stories by a fairly prolific author so there is plenty more where it came from!

The plot was strangely believable, and while not really a stroke story, the interaction between the main character and his new acquisition certainly was hot. Read the codes, if WS is not your thing you may want to avoid it, although the mention was fairly brief.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9