Reviewed:
In "Strap On Desire", we read about a woman that listens to one of her friends describe how she was given the best fuck of her life by another girl with a strap-on. The woman ends up trying it herself.
The sex was pretty good. While it may have been very intense for the voice of the story, it wasn't awe inspiring. While it is coded as FDom, there wasn't much domination.
The plot was short, obviously, but interesting. However, the story felt like it ended just as it could have hit another level by continuing.
Technically, it is off below average quality due to some common words being consistently misspelled. The most common culprit was misusing "your" instead of "you're". I found the errors to be distracting. This one was one Caesar's early postings, and his stuff has been somewhat better lately.
Caesar is usually good for stroke. I found this to not be as good as some of his other works. I liked the overall premise, but as I mentioned, I felt it should have been a longer story. I understand Caesar is either working with or looking for an editor. Here's hoping he finds one that helps eliminate technical problems, and let's his ability to write good stroke come through better.