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Author's Description:
Giroud Blackthorne, a Wanderer, rescues a young girl named Aya from captivity, which unknowingly sets in motion events that will shake the balance of power in their world. As master and apprentice overcome their own challenges to forge an unbreakable bond, they discover a darkness rising that threatens to consume everything in its path. Together, they must face the greatest enemy of all - a force of ancient magic that could destroy not just their realm, but their very souls along the way.
Size: 381 KB (67,275 words)
In Progress
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fiction, High Fantasy, Nudism

Review by SpartySam   [other reviews by SpartySam]

Reviewed:


Let me begin this review by noting that this is my first review. Secondly, this review is also going to be somewhat unusual in that: (1) it deals with a new author (I tend to stick to authors that I know and trust); and, (2) the story is incomplete. As a rule, I tend to avoid new authors until I see some support for them in the reviews; the same with incomplete stories (there are too many great but incomplete/inactive stories on this site).

However, I am going to break these two guidelines for this story (The Wanderer's Apprentice) and this author (JJx). I have just completed the first 21 chapters of this story and it is a good one. The story is well thought-out; the plot interesting, and the characters well developed (they have multiple dimensions). The writing is also very good (good flow, few if any grammatical and/or spelling errors). These strengths are surprising given that this is the author's (JJx) first story.

After finishing the first 21 chapters, I am hooked. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story to see how it resolves itself. I want to know what happens to the characters; I want to know how the strong tension present between the two main characters is going to be resolved; I want to know if the main characters find the peace and quiet that they deserve.

To anyone reading this review, take a chance on "The Wanderer's Apprentice" - I guarantee you that you will not be disappointed.

To JJx, congratulations for a great start. You are now on my list of authors of note - if I see another one of your stories, I will definitely read it.

Overall, highly recommended. I don't really do reviews on incomplete stories coming from first-time authors, but this one deserves it.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
 

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