The story of a young mother who wants to get in shape for her class reunion. Asking her son for help, she loses a little weight and gains a whole lot of love.
Size: 375 KB (71,050 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Incest, Mother, Son, Light Bond, Harem, Oriental Female, First, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Lactation, Pregnancy
Review by numq [other reviews by numq]
Reviewed:
This was really nice feel good story. The MC is perfect and loving towards his mother and there is very little drama involved that isn't quickly resolved. My only complaint would be the introduction of the new female love interest Kiki. To me it was like his mother cheated on him by not telling him about their kiss and near sexual encounter the first time and then making love to her and telling him after the fact without asking his permission first. It might bother other readers or be seen as cheating as I'm aware many guys don't acknowledge relationships between women that way. To me the story put way to much emphasis into their faithfulness in each other for me to get past it.
The MC also calls his mother wench, and bitch and other such names but its done in a sexual and loving manner. Still you've been warened.
Apart from that there were only a few grammatical errors in each chapter. There wasn't much of a plot and is was more of a stroke story. I stopped at chp 9 as it lost its appeal due to the aforementioned reason. Still a great story and highly recommended.
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
I make it a firm policy that I will not write a review unless the story is complete and says "THE END." So I have waited for two whole years to Review one of my favourite Author's tales.
This is a story about incest, it is a story of an overweight widow and her young son who has become not only a Jock but also quite a nerd, except in Human Sexuality. It is a love story where a mother and son find happiness together.
Debbie receives an invite to her class reunion and one look in a mirror tells her she ain't going nowhere in the overweight flabby body she has. So she appeals to Mark, the aforementioned son, and he takes her under his wing and produces a sexually frustrated beauty whom he realizes he loves desperately and unconditionally.
They suddenly find themselves consummating their wonderful love for each other, and the obvious result happens; yep, little Evie pops out and the frantic search is underway for a housekeeper par excellence; which they find in the body of beautiful Kiki a Eurasian sweetheart who captures the love of all three, especially Debbie who falls deeply in love with the young Japanese's body.
However poor little Kiki, a victim of a near rape act which sours her against male contact has her student visa cancelled and it is up to Mike and Debbie to find an answer to her being sent back to Japan where she could very well end up in a brothel.
So colt45 has done it again, and to find out how everything works out please read on, and enjoy!
Review by tendertouch [other reviews by tendertouch]
Reviewed:
It's a shame that colt45 didn't bother to fully code this story. For some people I'm sure it would be an easy 9 or 10 but for someone who doesn't get off on dominance or submissiveness it's at best a 6. The one surprising thing was that it was well enough written to keep me reading even when I found that there were aspects of the story that were very unappealing.
Lots of sex and nowhere near all of it involves the dom/sub stuff - just too much for my personal tastes.
I liked the plot a lot. Yes it starts with the whole mother/son incest theme (as coded) but it goes well beyond that. There are new, good and important characters introduced part way through that change the focus of the story and give it greater depth.
There were some minor technical glitches but nothing that stands out in my memory. They do tend to stand out more while reading the story because the author otherwise has a very good grasp of how to make the English language work for him.
