She was my best friend, but not my girlfriend. Then she asked the question that changed our relationship completely. Golden Clitoride 2nd Place, 2005, Best BDSM Story
Size: 452 KB (89,486 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Incest, Mother, Brother, Sister, Daughter, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Humiliation, Gang Bang, First, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Water Sports
Review by 54vette [other reviews by 54vette]
Reviewed:
Can this guy write a KILLER D/S story or WHAT?
SIZZLING doesn't even BEGIN to descrive just how hot "The Favor" is. Maybe more like "SCALDING!!!" Whatever you like to use, it's definitely BURNIN'!
I may be a bit prejudiced because I loved MWTB's first story "Tired of Being The Nice Guy".
But, this story promises to be even HOTTER than "Tired" was/IS.
MTWB has an awesome imagination and has the talent to put it down in such a way that it just sucks you in (no pun intended)and not only keeps the reader riveted to it, but wanting MORE!!!
As some of you may have noted, the styles of stories I've chosen to review are about love, romance, humor, sci-fi etc, Stuff we ALL like.
But, MTWB got me into being a real BDSM fan, this author always catches my attention and never disappoints.
Let me tell you a little about "The Favor". Rachel is a beautiful high school student who happens to harbor a dark secret. She's also a virgin (which is not the secret)
Rachel grew up next to Jeff all her life and they were great friends. Rachel also had a reputation for being an "Ice Queen". However, our little vixen also has a very dark side to her and feels the need to tell someone about it.
Here comes the "favor". She confesses her dark desires to her best and most trusted boy/friend. They're not boyfriend and girlfriend when the story starts. There's a lot of implication they will be. But, that's part of the story development. And develop it does.
Jeff has a rather dark side to himself although none of his friends, (with the exception of Rachel that is) knew of it. In confessing her deepest and darkest desires to Jeff, Rachel realizes she's given him carte blanche to treat her anyway he feels necessary to give her what she wants from "The Favor". Through it all though, the undertone of love, care, respect and appreciation for one another shines through. It's not a "cruelty" story. However, it's definitely got a lot of electricity to it.
And let me tell you, what's written so far will take your breath away
At the time of this review "The Favor" is up to chapter 18 and the HEAT is being TURNED UP!!
The writing, editing, content are superb.
If this one doesn't get voted for BEST BDSM STORY this year, I'll be highly disappointed.
A FUCKING AWESOME STORY MTWB!!!
