A father tricks his young naive daughter into having incestuous sex with him.
Size: 221 KB (40,122 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Incest, Father, Daughter
Review by La Luz [other reviews by La Luz]
Reviewed:
I'll work this from lowest to highest:
Technical quality:
I only rated this a 7 because the author's enthusiasm gets in the way of a writing better. There are no 'mondo' writing errors per se; just an overall sense of someone so in a hurry to TELL a story that their words run together.
Story Plot:
The premise, a dad duping his daughter into an incestous relationship, is at first glance ridiculous but it is handled with a charm that makes it amusing. I think an element was missed by not 'investigating' what was going on with the mother's weightloss program more fully but enough was hinted at it to make it a sly wink.
Stroke Amount:
Dafafu writes his stories as if he has a roadmap while this could lead to the boring, the enthusiasm makes you rush headlong down the map... yeah, rub her pussy with my thinly covered cock; next she touches me with bare hands over my thinly covered cock; then in the next scene we rip that cloth off!
Let's put it this way, i would love to see Dafafu take on a male teenage character from the first person. That would most likely leave me drooling on my keyboard and remember those furtive grasps at my first pair almost breasts.
Appeal to Reviewer:
Stroke doesn't have to be technically perfect; it needs to get you excited and Dafafu does that.
