Reviewed:
I stumbled across this little story recently. While it definitely could've benefited from at least a solid proofreading, it was technically adequate. While the story itself was rather disjointed, it's entirely possible that was intentional, as a way of mirroring the narrator's thought processes at the end of a lousy day at work. And while the story wasn't terribly original, and not really long enough for much character development... it was still a charming little story.
While those looking for stroke, and those looking for a long complex plot would be better served choosing another story, anyone interested in a quick, quirky read just might like it. I'd recommend such readers give the story a try.