Cruise by Tod

Author's Description:
This is my contribution to the stereotypical brother-sister story... at sea.
Imperfect tranlation of "Crucero", if you can read spanish, go for the original.
Size: 13 KB (2,532 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/ft, Reluctant, Incest, Brother, Sister, First, Pregnancy

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

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Sometimes one knows automatically when English is the second language of a writer, sometimes there is some doubt, which is the case here.

Now, unfortunately, bad english detracts from what would otherwise be a very good story about a comedy of errors, and the subsequent rape of a young virgin who gets entangled with real police handcuffs, and a frustrated brother.