Reviewed:
In "The Six Pills of Domination", we have the story of a high school boy that accidentally makes a mind control drug in his chemistry class. Once he realizes what he has, he sets out to cure his virginity. Along the way, learns a whole lot about women and life. Read along to see how things turn out.
The sex in this story is very hot. ElSol knows how to write charged sex scenes, and this story is full of them. ElSol managed to work in many of the classic portions of a MC story, which gives it a familiar feel while being fresh.
The plot itself is simply brilliant. While David is a bit of a strange person, he is still a teen with a hard cock, and it makes many of his decisions for him. The characters feel right, and the plot moves from situation to situation with just the right flow.
Technically, I do not recall any errors in this story.
Overall, this story really impresses for several reasons. The characters were believable, the situations were fun, and the sex was hot.
For me, I've always had a problem with a teenager that is written like they are in their late 30's when it comes to their knowledge of relationships and the opposite sex. And mind control stories are some of the worst offenders. While David has reasons for his behavior patterns due to the style in which he was raised, he still acts like a horny male teen. He reacts to each situation in a fairly logical way, making him believable. Especially not having a clue with some of his early conquests.
This is one of my all time favorites MC stories, and I highly recommend it to anyone that is a fan of that genre.