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Author's Description:
Steve needs a pair of bodyguards, but the ones he can afford on his budget don't offer much hope of keeping him alive - until he meets Mei and Wei. This is more an exploration of a concept than a sex story, but it IS one of my stories, so there IS sex in it, and those of you looking for stroke material shouldn't be too disappointed. I'm omitting one or more codes to avoid giving away the 'surprise' so pay attention to the caution tag.
Size: 135 KB (25,392 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Science Fiction, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Slow, Caution

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

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Although written in 2004 (now 2013), this is a well thought out plot with some unexpected twists.

It flows well and had me wanting to get to the end of the story to see how it finished. The sub-plots were not expected, the first enhanced the story line, whilst the second, was again unexpected but fitting.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

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When I first read and reviewed this story it was a GREAT short story. It was superbly written and totally captivating to me. Well, 'Shakes' did not dissapoint as many 'sequels' do. To the (present) end of "Bodyguards" he's added two more "killer" ts whom are just as adorable and lethal as Mei and Wei. Jun and Sun just happen to be sisters to our original ladies. Funny how that is huh? But, I won't give anymore away. Because, in essence, this is still a superbly written short story and I think everyone should read it. Your personal 'tastes' in the sex may differ from the authors. But, there is no getting around an exciting story of intrigue and this fits the bill to a 'tee'. Enjoy it!!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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