A boy falls in love at a school picnic. The girl of his dreams quickly disappears from his, and he loses track of her. Will he be able to survive the years until he again sees his true love? Will she feel the same for him? Will true love prevail? Winner of the February 2004 Silver Clitoride.
Size: 216 KB (41,485 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Slow, School
Review by Bobster [other reviews by Bobster]
Reviewed:
I just re-read this story, I had read it awhile ago and stumbled back onto it today. It's a feel good story with a happy ending, at least mostly.
Boy meets girl, falls in love, girl moves away, years later they meet again. It sounds formulaic, and it is a bit, but Jeremy carries it off well.
My only complaint would be that it was too short, I really like good stories, and this was one, and feel sad when they are over.
Technically well written, good, but not over the top, sex makes it just right! Don't pass this one by!
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
How any man can take an innocent child and physically and emotionally destroy her is beyond me. But this was Emily's life as a defenseless beautiful youngster.
John met Emily only once when she was eleven, but the memory of that fleeting moment stayed with him for more than ten years.
I'll shout it from the roof tops that I'm a sucker for a love story, but add steaming hot sex to it, and I go through the roof.
Now we have an emotionally damaged young woman who can finally put her troubled past behind her and enjoy the wonderful life she deserves. This one goes to the top of Jeremy's List!
Enjoy.
Review by Aragon H [other reviews by Aragon H]
Reviewed:
Simply put, 'Love At First Site' is a sex-filled romantic story. The scenes, as well as characters, in the story are so real that this could be a true story of how a man met his true love. The fact that this is fiction speaks of the great creative talent of Jeremy Spencer.
The stroke scenes are great. They are greatly interwoven into the plot and add to the magic of the story. The characters are lovable people that have their own personal problems and challenges that they must overcome. Again, very believable characters.
There was only one point in the story that could have been further developed. But that point does not undue the whole magic of the story.
Review by Pleasure Boy 1 [other reviews by Pleasure Boy 1]
Reviewed:
This is a brilliant story from the very first paragraph. The sex is very in-depth and arousing and the characters are solid and realistic.
It's actually got a story line too, which winds in and out of both good and bad events in John, the main character's life. It's very heavy on romance too, and for those of you who like the 'rom' stories this is a definite flag-waver.
Technically it's flawless, at only one of two typos among thousands and thousands of words. The grammar, structure, dialog, and flow are virtually perfect as well. There are no technical errors here to distract you from the story and characters in other words.
It is very long, of course, and it's quite an investment of time, but it's well worth it.
My only criticism would be his repetition of certain phrases describing the love making. I found it a little distracting after a while hearing about "rope after rope of sticky semen", for example. It was not a major flaw of course, but it could be improved.
For what your getting overall however, this flaw is hardly even worth mentioning. The story was exciting and stimulating and left me feeling like it was very worth the time it took to read.
Thanks Jeremy, for putting your heart into work, as well as your hormones.
