Reviewed:
The Colorado Kid is a good writer.
This story is a great start.
This story is like some of the others I have read recently, that start a with a good plot and leave you hanging. Of course if the author follows up with a sequal or adds additional chapters he could turn this good story into a great story.
This story gets a 9 for stroke because the sex is very nice, and leaves the plot intact.
Plot is great and should be continued as I have mentioned. I hope the author will agree. Although the plot is great, the story in my opinion is cut short at the end.
Appeal, I would read it again if the author continues it to completion. Leaving it hanging just leaves a bad taste in my mouth but is not a total story killer. Overall, good.