Reviewed:
This is a very good story. I enjoyed reading it.
The stroke amount is only a 8 because the author should have continued the story to at least the completion of the sexual situation he started to tell at the end of the story.
This story has an excellent plot, but the story is completed too early, and should have several more chapters. This author should write a sequal.
The story quality is high because the story has a overall good amount of sex to length ratio. I hope the author writes more, because this could become a nice serial story.
Appeal to reviewer is 8 because the author leaves you hanging not knowing what happend. The story is a nice read.