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Eric and Sheila are at the lake making out enjoying themselves. The problem is they are at the wrong place at the wrong time. This story has no redeeming social qualities. Just a fun sexy read that I am enjoying writing. Hope you enjoy it as well.
Size: 192 KB (37,685 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Fiction, Science Fiction, Aliens

Review by dookie   [other reviews by dookie]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


This is an update to my review of November 2024.

Staccato has revised and reissued the first few chapters of Alien Encounter and has seven chapters issued as of this review. Most errors have now been corrected and the story now reads and sounds clearer and better. I have therefore revised my Technical rating.

As I wrote earlier, this is a science fiction/fantasy story with an interesting plot line. It has developed well and now could go in a number of possible directions, which should keep readers guessing.

If you enjoy stories like this, it’s one to check out.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
 

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