Reviewed:
An interesting style in erotica. It's origin was evident from the first paragraph I read. Indian dialog mixed with English story telling, and translation is provided, however the author missed some places.
Overall I liked the story, even though the style was a little awkward and takes a little getting used to. It is however refreshing in that it shows a totally different society's view on erotica.
Of course the text was full of grammatical errors and sentences that were constructed by translating word for word to english, but it had a certain charm. The author shows promise in telling stories, but his skills need a lot of sharpening.
I would recommend the reading of the story simply to get a feel of different take on erotica.
Overall, I like the story.