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Author's Description:
Gary returns from Vietnam and finds a different world. He meets sisters Sandy and Jessica while hitchhiking across the country.
Size: 113 KB (22,099 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism

Review by Bud Ugly   [other reviews by Bud Ugly]

Reviewed:


I know this is an old story, but as I figuratively eat the elephant that is my reading queue (one bite at a time), I encounter old ones that are worthy of note.

I don't read many stroke stories, and even less often review them. But this one is worthy of review, IMHO.

This stroke story is woven into a vignette about a wounded warrior recently returned from Viet Nam. He finds he no longer fits in at home, so he's out on the road, hitchhiking. He gets picked up by a war widow, her sister, and her son.

Something about this story struck a chord in me. All the while I'm reading it, the music app in my head is playing Alice in Chains' "The Rooster."

Technically, it's good but not great; I found a number of typos and errors.

It's a fairly short read. I recommend it.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed:


A great read! Having grown up in the time described I felt the ring of truth in the description of attitudes and values.

The story is well written, sexy, and very easy to enjoy! Do yourself a favor and read it!

My usual complaint applies, it was too short! I want more! My next step is to see what else Gary has written and stick myself in!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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