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Author's Description:
When an unremarkable man does something remarkable the reward is not what he expects. After dying saving a girl he wakes up in a new world, with a new life, and a new purpose.
Size: 2039 KB (412,367 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Mult, Romantic, Fiction, High Fantasy, Magic

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

Reviewed:


Just When I Thought It Was All Over, It All Starts Again is a wonderful do over story.

The story is quick to start and draws you right into this Isekai story. A common problem with these stories is that the hero often gathers a huge harem of women and that each woman is that individually named, which blows up the cast very quickly.

Although Mikael draws a lot of women to him as well, Greven handled the problem of a big cast elegantly by keeping most wives and concubines anonymous, which in turn allows you to focus on key characters.

Another very refreshing change is that the protagonist does not conquer the entire economy or (re-)invents weapons that allows him to control the world, instead we have a protagonist who lets the world develop at its own pace. I really love this part since there is a natural development to the story that does not feel rushed.

There are some technical flaws in the story, but considering its size, that's bound to happen. Overall, the story is easy to read and follow. There is a good flow between dialogue and summarizing some parts as well as a good flow in the passage of time. I've noticed the story becoming better as the chapters progressed too.

The plot is very enticing and kept me reading page after page. It has a good pacing and there are various plot twists and developments that keep you wondering of how it will all end while you're rooting for the protagonist.

Overall, I love the story and I can't wait to see how it'll end.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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