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Author's Description:
Teaching two bitches a lesson.
Size: 177 KB (32,821 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Consensual, NonConsensual, Rape, Blackmail, Drunk/Drugged, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Humiliation, Torture, Orgy, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Bestiality, Novel-Pocketbook, Violent

Review by HighRiseWriter   [other reviews by HighRiseWriter]

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Synopsis: Fathers, sons and others come together to share their special form of loving to the women they encounter.

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Imagine Hee-Haw and Caligula mixed together and you have 'Barnyard Orgy'. The main plot of the story focuses on Harlan's (a father) attempt to break two beautiful conniving young girls who have blackmailed a town via sex and blackmail.

Harlan and his two sons, Seth and Delbert, along with Seth's new friend Tyler, kidnap the girls and force them into all forms of debauchery on his farm.

This was a very enjoyable read, besides plenty of well written and graphic sex, the author was able to bring out each character's distinctive personality by the use of dialogue, introspection and narrative.

The 'good ole boy' dialogue was extremely well done and thoroughly believable.

I almost started feeling sorry for the girls but the author threw in just enough reminders of their past sins to keep me rooting for the men.

The sentence structure was well done and only a few minor misspellings that did nothing to take away from the story.

The only complaint I have, which is actually a compliment in disguise, is regarding a character named Ruby. She only appears in the beginning of the story and then is forgotten. He drew her so enticingly that I almost wished the whole story was about her.

This story is definitely a keeper!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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