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Author's Description:
A young man comes back home to his mother
Size: 173 KB (32,665 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Incest, Mother, Son, Sister, Aunt, Nephew, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

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This is a great little story, and extremely erotic even for those that don't seek the added fillip of mother/son incest. If the incest part is the main driver for you, dear reader, then you're in for a treat.

The story is well written and characterised, with blessedly few typos, though sadly there is a tendency to mix 'to' and 'too'. I usually mention this because this sort of error detracts from the enjoyment of the story for those of us that know the difference; a bit like someone poking you with a stick when you're meditating.

I also got the impression that the story was wrapped up in a hurry, and finished three quarters of the way through. I was so sure of this I looked for a sequel, but alas there wasn't one.

[I lied! 'Twins' is a sequel to 'Coming Home', it just wasn't immediately apparent ;o)]

Having said all that, it's still a great story, and I would highly recommend it!

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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