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Author's Description:
A young man inherites all the wealth of his father and sets out to settle some scores and make some fantasies come true.
Size: 262 KB (46,569 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, NonConsensual, Cheating, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Cousins, Aunt, Nephew, MaleDom, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Novel-Pocketbook

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed:


In "Stepmother's Lover", we have a tale of a 18yr old guy that gets all of his father's inheritance, leaving his 25yr old stepmother with almost nothing but a willingness to be able to stay in the household.

The name is a bit of a misnomer, because not only does the Stepmother get involved, but the boy's sister, aunt, uncle, and both male and female cousins end up participating.

The sex is hot and almost non-stop. The author is fairly vivid in his descriptions, but some of them come across as almost comical due to the user of various descriptions. After a while the changes from "cock" to "fuckstick" to "meaty shaft", etc, take their toll, and dilute some of the effect. Still, if you are looking for stroke, this is pure stroke. And if you enjoy the changes in terminology because it makes it more vivid to you, then this really will scorch your eyes. (This reviewer doesn't find it enticing, hence the 9 instead of a 10.)

There isn't much plot in this story. It's pretty much "I've got a hold over you, just go along with what I say and all will be well", with all the family members deciding that they love the incest.

Technically, it is not that well done. There were a lot of instances of misspelled words, poor punctuation or capitalization, and even a few times where a letter "x" was thrown in at the beginning of a sentence. They are all little things, but they seem to add up over the course of the story. None of them by themselves threw me out of the "stroke value" effect. And with barely any plot, it didn't ruin a plot immersion. It is just clumsy writing with no editing.

If you are looking for stroke with incest, initially reluctant partners becoming enthusiastically willing ones, and a skeleton plot that won't distract you from the sex, this one should fit the bill very nicely.

Plot: 4 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
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