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Tony doesn't remember much about his childhood friends but he does recall one thing: the funny worm-like dance that 8-year-old Amy used to love to show him. Seeing it again as an adult puts it in a new perspective.
Size: 18 KB (3,543 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Masturbation, Oral Sex

Review by gmbusman   [other reviews by gmbusman]


‘Amy’s Wiggle Dance’ starts out as another down and jilted lover story, but quickly evolves into ‘the one that got away’. … except he never even knew it! Maracorby paints the protagonist as a clueless wedding guest who doesn’t even really want to be there. But things change during a late or post reception bout of Truth or Dare. She does the dare, he learns the truth, and the story is resolved with…. Well you’ll have to read it yourself to find out how it ends. …or does it?

This is a reasonably short, stand alone story, so you won’t waste a lot of time reading it. But I’m pretty sure after you read it, you’ll realize you didn’t waste your any time. I actually wish it had gone on longer…. But maybe Maracorby will write a sequel someday. I’d encourage that.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9


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