Lou is retired, so he takes a job at the local thrift store, where a lot of the young teens from the working class neighborhood come for clothes. Lou finds he can help the girls choose clothes at the same time he satisfies his sexual needs by fucking the slutty teens who shop at the store.
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Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Mult, Teenagers, Coercion, Consensual, Reluctant, Teen Siren, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Workplace, FemaleDom, Rough, Spanking, Group Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Double Penetration, Exhibitionism, First, Oral Sex, Petting, Pregnancy, Public Sex, Small Breasts
Review by Eddie Davidson [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]
Reviewed:
I don't generally find many stories like this any longer.
This is in the style of classics by Phil Phantom, or comics drawn by Randy Dave. If you know either of those, then you know what you are getting here.
Lou is the man. He's always in the right place at the right time. Lou is quite easily intended as the author or readers alter-ego.
He isn't a "Mary-Sue" character. You know those wish fulfilment stories where the main character has perfect mind control, olympic gymnast, wins at every sport, everyone loves him, good at everything?
No, Lou is an every man type. He just happens to be surrounded by over-sexed teens and mothers, who like to fuck.
I picture him to be a combination of Mr. Rogers and Ron Jeremy. He's a good guy at heart.
This is a collection of short stories, but they are all connected so they can be read in order. You might imagine them as vignettes with each chapter building upon the character Lou and introducing some fuckable pretty young thing, and then introducing some new plot element that usually ends in Lou laying pipe in the young lady/and/or her mom.
There is a gritty element of trailer parks and trashy sluts here, but it's the kind like Randy Dave used to draw (worth googling his comics if you don't know of him). This story evokes ideas of freckle faced, big titty teens that say things like
"God Damn, Davey! take it easy on my asshole. Daddy's planning a gang bang tonight, and I want to be tight for my Uncles."
On a technical note, I saw no grammatical mistakes and found it easy reading. I would like longer chapters and recurring characters but you can't always have everything.
I can recommend these stories. If you are a fan of Vulgus or MaryS this is going to be right up your (back) alley.
