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Author's Description:
Unlike most of my previous stories, this story more closely resembles a romance novel, I assume. I've never actually read one. There is a lot of sex and some of it is a tad kinky. But pretty much all of it is consensual. It's a story about a teenage girl being raised by her single mother. They live in poverty but find a way to improve their lot in life. There is one brief WS scene and one brief Bestiality scene and there are three brief encounters between white females and black males.
Size: 569 KB (118,029 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Mother, Daughter, Gang Bang, Group Sex, Anal Sex, Analingus, Cream Pie, Double Penetration, Exhibitionism, First, Oral Sex, Petting, Sex Toys

Review by Eddie Davidson   [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]

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Vulgus is a classic author of some very notable stories that define for me the type of erotic fiction that I enjoy. As such, this is going to be a biased review because this dirty old man knows how to spin a tale that pushes all of my buttons.

Vulgus writes with a very unique style and you can almost hear him telling you the story in your head. The pacing and tempo of the story never gets ahead of itself. Vulgus takes his time and sets the mood, then he brings you into his world and suddenly you are behind the shoulder of the main character watching the events unfold until you are dropped off at the end - I usually can't stop reading and finish his stories in one session.

He hasn't written any stories in a while, which is a shame. Paula's Part Time Job is 14 chapters of really good stuff. Different in some ways from earlier stories, but still saucy and rich. It's a coming of age story about a girl that is aware of the power of her own sexuality, and through experimentation and encouragement blossoms into a lusty desire. Obviously, there is going to be a "part time job"

You won't find anything in the way of BDSM or deep humiliation and the women in this story enjoy and embrace sex. It's a fun, fascinating read and I love his longer stories.

There are a couple of minor grammatical errors that I noticed, and I mean super minor that you may not even notice so on Technical I'd give it a 9.99 and round up. As to Appeal, if you are a Vulgus fan, this is not his old stuff - but I strongly encourage a read. If you are not a Vulgus fan but like stories about teenage girls, incest, and sex - this is a good one for you.

If you have never heard of Vulgus and you like MY stories, then you will LOVE Vulgus because he is one of my all time inspirations and probably the main reason I write dirty fiction stories.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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