Reviewed:
This is a lovely story about how fiction can turn into reality.
I loved the plot, the characters, and the action between them.
On the technical side I spotted a few mistakes, but nothing too distracting that can't easily be fixed.
The only downside I see to the story is that I'd have loved to see Amelia more involved at the end and maybe a bit more graphical scenes, but these points were so minor that it didn't substract anything from my appeal.
I'd love to read more stories like these on SOL. It'd have been even more fun if B3 and A. did some actual crime fighting too, but once again that's not what this story was about.