Nate Dunn was a young man growing up in Iowa, just ready to start high school when a fateful phone call came out of the blue, setting him on the path to becoming the new Gadgeteer, super-suit builder for hire and perhaps even a hero himself?
Size: 161 KB (31,220 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Superhero, Science Fiction
Review by manddscott [other reviews by manddscott]
Reviewed:
Who is to say what genius looks like? Could it be a young boy growing up with a multitude of ideas? What makes a hero? This story tries to answer at least some of those possibilities.
The biggest issue with the story so far, is the fact that it is, by the author's own admission, incomplete. That is because the author admits but there will be a second, and possibly more, stories to follow. Personally, I'm looking forward to them.
For plot, the story gets a solid B (7). There's actually nothing wrong with it oh, other than the fact that it is incomplete. For technical score, the author gets an A+ (9). There were a few errors across the short story, mainly dealing with the misuse of homophones, but they weren't many and they didn't get in the way of the story. For personal appeal, the story gets a solid A (8). It could be higher if the missing stories were out already. Since they are not, I reserve the right to change the score those come out. Overall, a well-told tale.
