A daughter he never knew he had. A lover who becomes much more. Evolving relationships with others that he never suspected he'd have.
Size: 301 KB (61,731 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction
Review by manddscott [other reviews by manddscott]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
A man is confronted by a child he's never seen before. The question... is he her daddy? This story follows the lives of the girl, her previously unsuspecting father, and her mother and new stepfather across a few years.
For plot, I give the story an A-plus (9). There was a good character development, a decent storyline, and some likable characters. Of course, with the likeable characters you have to also mix in the occasional asshole.
Where this story suffers is in the technical score. A lot of small errors, mainly misspellings or misused words were visible throughout the story. For that reason, the story gets a C (6) in technical score.
In overall appeal, the story gets an A-plus (9), if for no other reason than the fact that the author developed some characters that many of us would love to hang around with. Whether it's The Kid or one of the other characters, take your pick.
