Young girl drives neighbor crazy and helps her daddy land his new job.
Size: 4684 KB (927,441 words)
In Progress
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Coercion, Drunk/Drugged, NonConsensual, Rape, Reluctant, Fiction, MaleDom, Snuff, Spanking, Black Male, White Female, Exhibitionism, First, Facial, Oral Sex, Pregnancy, Voyeurism, Teacher/Student, Prostitution, Violence
Review by rgmanneck [other reviews by rgmanneck]
Reviewed:
Reading this story was like running a marathon without getting tired. The story set a new track record in the genre of sexual fantasies.
Unlike other stories that immediately jump out of the gate running after the first two or three paragraphs to fervid orgasmic frenzy, as if the characters have nothing better to do and can so easily flip the switch to mind-boggling sex of every shade, color and temperature, this story gradually builds the atmosphere and action into a plot that feels remarkably real.
At 14, Madison, the main character, is not only old enough but physically prepared to learn fast to know what to do to make people happy, especial men, who are constantly aroused in her presence, having pornographic thoughts, and yet they treat her nicely.
There is lots of nudity, passionate kissing, cunnilingus and fellatio throughout the story, and it never gets stale or monotonous. It’s always exciting, and the action evolves as Madison’s ability to please and pleasure improves with practice, as she likes to call it.
The reader gets to know Madison’s bubbly personality and good looks, not from the author, but through the descriptions of people around her, especially the men who describe her as being “cute as fuck.” But they are mostly mesmerized how she is able to conduct herself and display her “innocent sexuality oozing out of her.”
There is no coercion to the lascivious activities. It’s all consensual, and Madison loves it. She not only is incredibly loving, but very lovable by everyone: neighbor, friend, her dad’s boss, his wife, chauffeur, teacher, and the list goes on.
The story is rich in dialog which flows naturally and is authentic. The author handles emotional responses and reactions amazingly well. The interaction between Madison and the other characters is flawless and genuine, always providing the reader with a glimpse into their unspoken thoughts and attitudes which keep the story steamy enough without blowing a lid. The juxtaposition or back-and-forth of expressions, points of view and thoughts between the characters keeps the level of emotional feelings intense. There is never a dull moment. It’s a balancing act that the author has mastered well and employs it skillfully.
If Madison was not controlled by a powerful figure nor coerced by the people she interacts with to participate in all the sexual activities that abound throughout the story, in the end she was willing to sacrifice herself for her dad, to make him happy and proud of her. Not only did she know what she had to do, but was happy that she had given herself, her body and her virginity, to a man. Moreover, she wanted to hear from her dad how much it was worth for that man to “shove his cock” into her virgin, 14-year-old pussy. And yet, her dad has no clue what has happened or what she is capable of doing for him and for herself.
I enjoyed reading this story for the entertainment and emotional ride, and urge you to read it, too.
