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Author's Description:
Maya takes a chance and moves to Chicago, but things don't go as planned. However, sometimes it's better that way.
Size: 408 KB (80,953 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction

Review by Quasirandom   [other reviews by Quasirandom]

Reviewed:


I do love me a solid romance between young adults. This story delivers just that, most excellently. (PennLady mines this vein very well. Check out all her novel-length fics.)

Maya has moved to the big city, specifically Chicago, for a fresh start. Things don’t go quite as she planned, especially with her boyfriend who is … yeah, let’s just say he’s a bad boyfriend. Very bad. Good thing she breaks up with him in the first chapter and meets Toby instead. Toby is very much not a bad boyfriend, but it takes a while to prove it. Plans need altering, after all. And good friends are essential support.

Well-written, both sweet and hot, with an excellent story arc, this is an excellent example of a new adult romance. It’s the author’s most recent story, and I hope we can entice her to continue writing. Recommended.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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