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Author's Description:
On the eve of the election, a religious fanatic begins threatening one of the candidates, resulting in the death of a Secret Service Agent when things escalate beyond simple threats. Taylor and Whitaker are tasked with finding the maniac before he can kill anyone else, including possibly the future President of the United States. The Secret Service, who don't approve of Taylors unorthodox methods, force the pair to once again work outside the system to accomplish their goal.
Size: 330 KB (63,135 words)
Genre: Thriller
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fiction, Crime

Review by Riceeyes   [other reviews by Riceeyes]

Reviewed:


Another fine mystery, action thriller from Lumpy.

A psychopath thinks the presidential candidate will bring about the end of the world and must be stopped. Read how John uncovers his plans and how he deals with him.

One problem with this story.

It posted too slow. LOL. It was so good I had to go to Amazon and download it so I could read it faster.

Some interesting technical stuff to me but not so much that it bogged the story down. About bombs and how the military deals with it. It could have all been fiction but it was done well in my opinion.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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