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Author's Description:
There is poetry written for many occasions; poetry written for recital in chambers and on stages. Poetry written for love, poetry written to celebrate life. Poetry told by candlelight or in sunlight. This isn't any of those. This is the kind of verse recited by grim drunk sailors, well past midnight, in dark taverns when storms are blowing up. This is in standard 8.6.8.6 meter - standard for hymns. It also happens to be the meter for The Animals version of House of the Rising Sun.
Size: 6 KB (1,235 words)
Genre: Poem
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fa/Fa, Violent

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed:


A very interesting piece of literature from a master Todd_d172 and The Missus. I don’t usually read poetry but after having just finished his latest work, ‘The Shack: An Unstoppable Man’, being in a good mood read The Bride.

A short doggerel about a newlywed bride, whose marriage was torn asunder by a troop of the Kings cutthroat men. As The Bride contemplated ending her life at the oceans edge, did a voice beckons her from out in the sea, a voice of vengeance that did awaken a nutritious soul. Aye but a lonely mermaid willing to assist the tortured bride, a way to make things right.

A very righteous poem from an excellent writer.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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