A very young couple cross paths returning home on a crowded London Train at Christmas time.No words are exchanged but the shared experience will last them a lifetime.
Size: 9 KB (1,695 words)
Genre: True Story
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, True Story, Sharing
Review by burka_oz [other reviews by burka_oz]
Reviewed:
Ahhh, sweet unrequited romance. I love it. A quick tale that may have been true, only the author really knows. Both participants were freely consenting. The train was packed so nothing more than what was achieved was possible or even likely. This was not a Japanese Chikan story - Google it.
The ending was poignant, akin to ships passing in the night and continuing on their way.
I was charmed by this little tale. It felt so real. I could feel the press of the multitude around me. I felt the sway of the train. I understood just how the participants were feeling during their indecent interlude.
Good writing and thanks to Emmeran for pointing me to this author and his story.
It is a short tale so I just don't feel like awarding any evaluations on Plot. There were no errors, grammatical or otherwise. I have already said how much this appealed to me.
All that you have to do dear Reader, is take a look for yourself and enjoy this sweet interlude as I did.
