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Author's Description:
When you can buy almost anything, what would be a perfect gift for your wife?
Size: 8 KB (1,681 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Fiction

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed:


I seem to be reviewing shorter stories lately, this is another short one. SleeperyJim has slid this one into a strong showing.

You have a good devoted husband spending several weeks selling the company that he started. While he was distracted with the sale, his wife had been abandoned across the country. As the husband hurried home after completing the sale, he wonders what he how he could make up being gone for so long. Her birthday is just three week’s away.

In the ‘Present Perfect’ the author SleeperyJim has given us a chance to feel a marriage reaching new heights.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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