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Author's Description:
Sticking together in adversity can really get tight. Here is an excellent example of just how tight and how stuck together some folks can get in the long run too.
Size: 22 KB (4,365 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Romantic, Cheating, Sharing, Incest, Group Sex

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

Reviewed:


Scott and Rose become stranded in a snow storm and things quickly heat up between the two, which helps them stay warm.

I quite enjoyed the plot, although Tony Tiger could have focused more on 'show don't tell' to make the story even better. An example of this is how the premise could use more details. The story started very strong, but then became more of a summary. This hurt the appeal to the story somewhat, although a 'very good' (8) still makes for a good story.

If you're looking for a quick 'stranded' story with a nice plot twist in the middle, then I can recommend reading this one.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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