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Author's Description:
A farce about a popular TV show.
Size: 35 KB (6,626 words)
Genre: Humor
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


Opening scene: Two Of Manhattan's Special Victims Unit detectives are surveilling a suspected criminal's house, and looking up the block, they see a line forming for a concert. In the line of people, the detectives see what appears to be a man molesting a child. The pedophile was a man handling a young girl. The shit hits the fan as they try to intervene, save the child, and arrest the pedophile; only the detective messed up.

The story works, just like the tv show leaving large holes in the plot. What can you expect? It's kind of like a tv show, barely adequate. A good setup but ends too quickly, just like a tv episode. The story is ok, but don't plan on being enriched by it.

Plot: 5 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 4
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