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Author's Description:
What happens when the good boy meets up with the wrong girl and finds things outside his experience, things that shouldn't be there, Things that just aren't right. That turn out right.
Size: 223 KB (42,809 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Reluctant, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Paranormal, White Male, Oriental Female, First, Oral Sex, Small Breasts, Geeks

Review by burka_oz   [other reviews by burka_oz]

Reviewed:


This, this is a story that I believe you must read. Why? Because it contains the seeds of such a relationship between two that our present world would find difficult to explain and yet, these two have become as one. We can hope to live in such a relationship, in such a oneness with our other half.

I have often heard the saying, 'she completes me...'

In this tale, she not just completes him, she turns his life inside out and yet by the end of it we see him living up to what he has always known inside what he needs to do, what he needs to become.

Though she was sent as a curse to bring eventual death to the receiver, she brings life and gets life herself through some twisting of the cords of Fate.

Her presence, though ephemeral at first, becomes solid and a true blessing. Not just for Robert, her chosen victim, but for all who meet and get to know her. Such a beautiful young woman. She explains the old story about true beauty comes from inside and is expressed outside.

Oyster50 has written many a good tale over the years that I have enjoyed his stories. Sorry to those who enjoy his sexcapades better, but this is him reaching his highest achievement in writing so far. This has so many levels, has such a depth of characterisation. I will say it again. You must read this story. Don't miss it or let it drop by the wayside.

Score? Who cares? 10-10-10! What else is there to say?

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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