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Author's Description:
A young couple decides to change their marriage.
Size: 424 KB (82,437 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Sharing, BDSM, DomSub, FemaleDom, Light Bond, Rough, Spanking, Polygamy/Polyamory, White Male, White Female, Anal Sex, Analingus, Enema, Oral Sex, Pegging, Big Breasts

Review by Eddie Davidson   [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]

Reviewed:


What a pity this story was never completed. It has an arc that I feel does fully play out.

Let me first say that notoriously, stories about FLR (Female Led Relationships or Marriages) and Femdom are usually overwhelmingly down voted.

As of this writing, this story has a 7.5, which is astronomical given the subject matter. It's a testament to the authors that worked on this story.

It's told from the wives perspective. There is a very authentic narrative around how she came around to considering FLR that rings true. Her husband is interested and she reluctantly reads about it and decides basically - if this is something he is truly interested in then maybe there is something to it.

The wife absolutely blossoms in control. She feels empowered, confident and supported. The husband enjoys giving and being submissive. She is not abusing him or "Taking" anything from him that he doesn't want to give.

The training makes him 'better' for her needs, and I love the exploration.

As I say, the only downside is that it is not completed and likely never will be.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A
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